又双叒叕是李华!2025高考英语作文深度解析来了(附历年真题及范文)

广东教育传媒 2025-06-11 09:56

2025年高考落下帷幕

作为常年混迹在英语作文区的

“著名钉子户”

李华“送走”并“为难”了

一届又一届考生

今年刚刚新鲜出炉的

新课标I卷应用文题目中

李华的身影依然在

考题的背后

考查了考生哪些能力?

可以从哪些角度切入?

《广东教育》(高中)英语学科资深编辑

为大家准备了试题解析及范文

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试题回顾及解析

2025年新课标I卷应用文

假定你是李华,你班的英文报要增设一个栏目,外教Jenny提出“Fun at School”和“Guess Who I am”两个选项供大家选择,请给Jenny写一封邮件,内容包括:

1.你的选择; 2.你的理由

Dear Jenny,

I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper.

一 命题特点

1.情境真实

主题语境为“人与社会”,“校园生活类”,话题贴近考生生活。情境设置方面,“你班英文报”“给外教Jenny写邮件”等信息明确了使用英语写作的必要性,使情境具有真实性。

2.任务具体

题干和要点依然是“极简风”,题面简洁清晰,任务具体,考生能快速抓取写作要点。

3.思维开放

要求考生自主生成观点(你的选择)和理由(你的理由),具有一定开放性,能激发考生思考。

4.立德树人

通过设置“写信给外教说明自己建议选择增设的栏目和理由”这一具体情境活动,引导考生培养班级责任感和“主人翁”意识,积极参与班级、校园文化建设。两个栏目的设计,“Fun at School”引导学生关注校园生活中的美好时刻,培养乐观积极心态和对学习生活的热爱。“Guess Who I am”鼓励学生用心观察,发现他人内在的优秀品质,培养同理心和发现美的能力。

二 写作难点

1.思维层面:两个选项的权衡比较及个性化论证

考生比较容易陷入的误区包括理由流于表面(如It’s interesting),缺乏对所选栏目“独特性”和“教育价值”的思考,仅停留在I like it的个人层面。

2.内容层面:理由的充分性和逻辑性

对栏目内容进行具象化描述,将题干所提供的抽象栏目名转化为具体内容的设想,增强说服力,如Fun at School举例“实验课上的趣事”或Guess Who I am举例“喜欢诗词的数学学霸”等。

在80词限制下,理由要充分,必须有所取舍,比如个人喜好层面的理由可让位于栏目价值层面。

3.语言层面:表达精准,语言得体

在报刊栏目这一语域场中,精准使用如interactive(互动性的),relatable(有共鸣的)等表明栏目优势的词语是词汇储备不够丰富的考生面临的难点。

写给外教的邮件需平衡“亲切与正式”,避免语气过于随意与刻板(如Hey或I think you should...),保持礼貌(如开头可提Thank you for offering these options),展示学生视角的真诚(As students, we often wish to...)。

4.结构层面:在极简框架中构建层次

要在题干所给要点“选择+理由”这一框架之下构建层层深入的结构层次对于考生而言是比较难的,针对这一题,可以采用“明确选择+核心理由+升华意义”的三层递进结构,如:I personally vote for “Guess Who I am”(明确选择). It offers interactive guessing game while learning vivid descriptions(核心理由). Through anonymously highlighting peer’s strengths, it builds mutual appreciation.

综上,这道看似简洁的题目实则对考生的思维能力和语言应用提出了较高要求,要在“简短中见深度”,考生需具备在开放性问题中构建严谨逻辑链的能力,在贴近生活的表象下,展现对校园文化、人际观察、读者心理的深刻思考,才能写出让阅卷老师“眼前一亮”的高分佳作。


接下来,一起看看近年高考英语全国I卷应用文试题,这些试题有何共同之处?体现了什么样的命题趋势和特点?对目前还在高一高二的同学有何启发?

2024年新课标I卷应用文

假定你是李华,上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历,内容包括:

1.你完成的作品;

2.你的感想。

注意:

1.写作词数应为80个左右;

2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。

Dear Chris,

I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.

2023年新课标I卷应用文

假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括:

1. 说明问题;

2. 提出建议。

注意:

1. 写作词数应为80个左右;

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Ryan,

I’m Li Hua from Class 3.

2022年新高考I卷应用文

假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华,请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括:

1. 节目介绍;

2. 访谈的时间和话题。

注意:

1. 写作词数应为80左右;

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Caroline,

《普通高中英语课程标准(2017年版2020年修订)》指出:“英语表达能力是指学生用英语进行口头或书面表达的能力,特别是在真实语境中传递与沟通信息、再现生活经历、表达观点、意图和情感的能力。”

近年高考应用文无不体现“真实语境”“表达观点”“再现经历”等关键词,已形成“真实校园情境+具体交际任务+开放思维要求”的稳定范式。试题通过贴近考生学习生活的微场景,考查其在真实语境中“传递信息、表达观点、解决问题”的综合能力。这也为高一高二的同学们指明了方向:必须摒弃模板,转向“以交际目的为导向,以思维品质为内核”的深度写作训练。在平时的学习中,多积累真实体验,以真实具体、细节丰富的内容打动评卷者,言之有物、情感真挚才是最好的写作技巧。

2022-2025英语全国I卷

应用文范文

2025年新课标I卷应用文范文

Dear Jenny,

I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper. Your proposal to add either “Fun at School” or “Guess Who I Am” has sparked lively class discussions. After careful consideration, I strongly advocate for “Guess Who I Am”. (背景补充,更显交际意识)

This column would transform passive reading into an interactive discovery game. Students could submit anonymous profiles highlighting peers’ unique traits—for example, “the student who tutors math in the library every Tuesday”—allowing readers to decode clues while appreciating unnoticed virtues. (抽象栏目名转化为具象化内容)Compared to general fun anecdotes, this format offers more depth by celebrating everyone’s hidden strengths, perfectly aligning with our goal to promote mutual understanding and appreciation. (对比论证,突出所选栏目价值与优势)

Thank you for considering my idea. I believe that “Guess Who I am” will be a great addition to our English newspaper.

Sincerely,

Li Hua

《广东教育》(高中)编辑部 吴昊雷

2024年新课标I卷应用文范文

Dear Chris,

I am writing to share with you the art class I had in the park last Friday.

For my artwork, I captured a vibrant scene of a small pond in the park,where ducks swam leisurely on the rippling water and fishes blew bubbles among weeds. Near the pond was a kid flying kites, which brought a sense of vitality and joy to the painting. Additionally, surrounded by other park-goers and colorful butterflies, a group of seniors were exercising with rhythmic movements.

This art class created a new teaching approach and integrated art education with nature experience. Not only did it embody harmony and balance between human and nature, but also enhanced my enthusiasm for art and unlocked my inner artistic potential.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

深圳市高级中学(集团)东校区 刘佳

2023年新课标I卷应用文范文

Dear Ryan,

I’m Li Hua, from Class 3. I have benefited a lot from your teaching, but I am afraid that the approach of practicing oral English pratice is not a good idea.

As we all know, our classmates are at different levels in oral English. Some students can dominate the conservation while a few students can’t speak at all. Additionally, some students may not take the practice seriously because of lacking a specific topic. To settle these issues, I wonder if you could allow us to pair up freely according to the personal level. And would it be possible for you to assign several topics based on our interests?

I hope that you will take my suggestions into consideration. Good luck with your life and work.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

浙江省德清县第六中学 沈奥

2022年新高考I卷应用文范文

Dear Caroline,

I am Li Hua, a student in charge of the campus radio station’s English program “Talk and Talk”. Excited to know that you are one of the most popular teachers in our school, I am writing to invite you to have an interview for our program.

With the aim to spread more foreign culture, our program is mainly about how foreigners spend their time here in China. Therefore, the topic is about your teaching here in China and your feelings for China, preferably giving you a chance to reflect on the beautiful memory with the students. Concerned that our talk might last long, we can set the interview at 5 pm on Friday afternoon, which of course can be flexible to suit your daily schedule.

We would appreciate it if you could accept our invitation. We are expecting your favorable reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

佛山市南海区石门中学 林良达


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